Sunday, 31 May 2015

Gender in Fiction: A Q&A with Dr Ana Stevenson

This week's edition of The Narrative Within is 48 hours early, for a variety of reasons. The first and foremost, is due to just how important the post is this week. The title, "Gender in Fiction: A Q&A with Dr Ana Stevenson", should be a giveaway as to why it is important. I invite all my readers to feel free to comment upon, and share this interview, as it covers a very important topic within the world of literature.

The issue of gender, and how it is depicted and discussed in popular culture, is one of the more heated points of debate at present. Television programs, films, books, and video games all present their audiences with competing stances on the matter. For some time now, I have wanted to discuss this in some way. I felt, however, that I would benefit from inviting someone better versed in the subject area to do so.
So I scoured the globe, hunting for someone who could shed light on this topic. Eventually, after extensive searching, I found one such champion in the Northern Hemisphere.
Dr Ana Stevenson, a PhD Graduate of the University of Queensland (Australia), is an historian and academic who recently completed her thesis entitled "The Woman-Slave Analogy: Rhetorical Foundations in American Culture, 1830-1900". As well as being a talented historian and former college-mate of mine, she has a keen interest in gender related matters.
As such, I thought she would be an excellent candidate for my discussion on gender in fiction. Today, I am pleased to present my first interview for The Narrative Within, the topic being Gender in Fiction, with my special guest: Dr Ana Stevenson.

Gender in Fiction: A Q&A with Dr Ana Stevenson


NC: When it comes to fictional literature, and in particular Fantasy, do you feel that such works have an important part to play in the wider discussion of gender, and feminism? If so, why?

AS: Yes, I think all literature, including fantasy, has an important part to play in the wider discussion of gender and feminism.  As an element of popular culture with an ever-growing fan base, fantasy literature has the opportunity to present different possibilities for the representation of gender, because it can validate, challenge, and transcend the lived experience of gender identity.
Some fantasy writers, like George R.R. Martin, have already acknowledged the important influence feminism has had on their work and worldview.  Nor is he alone.  Across science fiction, speculative fiction, dystopian fiction, and historical fiction, Margaret Atwood, Octavia Butler, and Geraldine Brooks, to name just a few, have likewise infused their writing with a feminist perspective.  David Weber’s science fiction also explores female heroes who are strong, damaged, independent – in short, complete people.
This doesn’t mean these authors only present women in their best light, though.  Instead, they use their fiction to problematise and complicate the role of women, both in their fantasy world, and in ours. Their novels have therefore sparked debate and even controversy about the representation of women, gender, sex, power, violence, rape, and bodily autonomy.  I hope that this is a trend that will continue in the future, as new novelists become inspired by – and surpass – their forbears.

NC: Would it be reasonable to argue that works of fiction (and thus, by extension their authors) have become more aware of sensitive issues surrounding gender and feminism?

AS: Some literature has reached a tolerable awareness of gender issues; other literature – even that of prizewinning authors – hasn’t.  This is not to mention issues pertaining to race, sexuality, class, religion, nationality, and a host of other issues – authors need to think about all of these intersecting issues sensitively and reflectively.  Literature should never simply be content with reproducing the status quo.  In the past, concern about the politics of gender in literature and popular culture have often accompanied social movements toward women’s rights.  This happened during the late nineteenth century and the late twentieth century, and is equally true in the present.
Unfortunately, this doesn’t mean that all works of fiction have come to a more progressive view of gender.  Novels can still be misogynistic, not least because of how they depict graphic and gratuitous sexual violence.  For literary scholar Margaret Bruder, the ‘aestheticisation of violence’ that accompanies the visual medium of film represents a disconnection between violence and its consequences.
Other forms of violence can also shape supposedly nuanced approaches to gender in popular culture, under the guise of supposedly liberatory representations of gender.  Fifty Shades of Grey (2014), for example, has been criticised for covertly depicting a form of domestic violence in terms of romance.  This is not a prudish response to BDSM, but rather a concern over the way the female protagonist becomes emotionally and physically isolated over the course of the story.
When there is such a disconcerting overlap between depictions of romance and violence both within and beyond the fantasy genre, as the recent Gamergate controversy has proven, it seems dangerous to become complacent.  

NC: More than once in discussions on gender in Fantasy, a particular argument has arisen. Namely, the argument that the author should model their gender roles on those of the historical period that inspires their own setting. Would you say that this is a fair assessment, or do you feel that it is a defence used by authors who might fear they have depicted one gender unfairly?

AS: This is a very important question.  Since fantasy is imaginative, it’s a bit of a poor excuse for authors to be content with the gender demarcations of our own history and present.  Just think of the different uses of gender across multiple adaptations of Robin Hood.
It’s also important to remember that all popular culture reflects its own era more clearly than the era it seeks to represent.  This is true even when novelists are striving toward historical authenticity.  Fantasy, unlike historical fiction, may seek to engage with an historical era, but it usually depicts more of an imagined history.
Striving toward historical “accuracy” can also have its downfalls.  Take Game of Thrones, for example, which admittedly depicts widely varied representations of gender.  But some commentators find this to be tame when compared to the fluidity of gender during the medieval era.  Others argue that it is not based on medieval history, but actually the early modern period – a discrepancy that is significant for any author who is seeks historical authenticity.  Still others question the use of violence as party of the everyday in Game of Thrones.  It has been pointed out that while the medieval and early modern period were very violent, but this was largely limited to particular spheres, in primary example being the violence of war.  The television series in particular has a degree of frequent and visceral violence is too overwhelming to be authentic.  When there are so many questions about which vision of history inspired a particular text, the fluidity between history and literature is really noticeable.
But what is historical accuracy when it comes to depicting gender?  Women have nearly always been restricted by social conventions – as have men, though arguably to a lesser degree – but they have never been wholly passive to such constraints.  There’s also an important difference between historical fact and the opinions of individual women toward these facts.  Australian women did not have federal suffrage rights until Federation, but what did individuals think about their disenfranchisement?  Some women believed that it was their right to vote; others believed that the public realm of politics would contravene their femininity.[1]  In short, to imagine historical uniformity stifles creativity, but to think about the gaps surrounding gender and gender identity presents wonderful opportunities for the novelist.

NC: Recently, we both read Debra Ferreday’s article ‘GAME OF THRONES, RAPE CULTURE AND FEMINIST FANDOM.’ Rape is an extremely sensitive topic within society, and definitely within writing circles. What are your thoughts on the depiction of rape in fiction?

AS: Debra Ferreday’s article is a great introduction to journalistic, scholarly, and fan responses to rape in popular culture.  There are many competing perspectives on this topic, shaped by a few key questions: how to depict rape; how frequently it should feature in narratives; and whether it should be depicted at all.  I think controversial topics like rape need to be addressed because fiction and popular culture can condemn, but also communicate, the horror and dehumanisation of such acts.  That being said, many if not most representations of rape unfortunately do not achieve this goal.
Since Game of Thrones is so popular – and has so many rape scenes – it’s a really useful example for thinking about this question. Ferreday’s analysis of the way feminist fans reacted to the Jaime-Cersei Lannister rape scene outlines just how different ‘feminist’ responses to rape can be.[2]  One thing that needs to be said is that the process of adaptation – in this case, between the novels and television.   Fans of the books and the television series are deeply attuned to the important differences between the source material.  By ‘botching’ the process of adaptation, from a morally wrong but basically consensual scene in the book to a disturbing rape scene in S04E03, it has been suggested, audiences are compelled to forget that it ever happened.
There should be no need for viewers to silently absolve a character because of faulty adaptation, faulty depiction, or rape as a lazy plot device.  Since rape is a topic of controversy and cultural currency, there is an urgent need to engage with this topic intelligently and sensitively in popular culture.

NC: Does literature, in your opinion, have a duty to discuss social issues such as rape, domestic violence, and the gender gap? What role should it play in the discussion on these topics?

AS: From my perspective, literature can and should play an engaged and even activist role in discussing contemporary social issues.  Amanda Claybaugh’s analysis of nineteenth-century social reform literature describes such works in terms of ‘the novel of purpose’.[3]  If any novel has a purpose, surely it is to bring an empowering and transformative message – particularly regarding social justice – to reading audiences.
Historically, many social reform novels have become popular culture blockbusters, so to speak.  Take Harriet Beecher Stowe’s antislavery novel, Uncle Tom’s Cabin; or, Life Among the Lowly (1852), which became a mass-market sensation during the 1850s in the United States and beyond.  Feminist fiction such as played an instrumental role in consciousness-raising, as have later novels such as Anita Diamant’s The Red Tent (1997).[4]  Similarly, climate change fiction – which has its own genre name, cli-fi – such as Kim Stanley Robinson’s Three Californias Series (1984-1990) plays the activist role, as do disaster blockbuster films such as The Day After Tomorrow (2004), 2012 (2009), and San Andreas (2015).
At the same time, novelists must be acutely aware of a multiplicity of social justice issues so as to be as inclusive as possible.  The novels and films just mentioned each perpetuated racist, sexist, and classist stereotypes, while the cli-fi genre centres mostly on the experience of those living in the West.  On account of their popularity, these assumptions are shared with vast audiences, a process which continues as they are recovered, republished, and become canonical.  Social reform novels remain encumbered by the prejudices of their era, but they also present a radical reimagining of society.

NC: The sensationalisation of sex and rape is in many ways not a new thing in the literary world (cf. Donaldson’s The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant), but Martin’s Game of Thrones saga has certainly upped the ante, in no small way due to its great proliferation, which was only enhanced by the HBO television series. Would you say this is a positive or negative trend, and why?

AS: This is a very important question.  Many have reservations about the sensationalisation of sex and rape in Game of Thrones.  Its feminist potential has been questioned, as well as endorsed, and these alternate perspectives often hinge on the power (both political and physical) seized by female characters, or the prevalence of nudity, sex, and gender violence.  The varying responses to the different rapes also reveal worrying degrees of acceptance.  The rape of virginal Sansa Stark is deplored, whereas perhaps the power-hungry Cersei Lannister deserved it?  And the constant rape of the peasant women of Craster’s Keep is now all but forgotten.  The sensationalisation of rape might, sadly, have the potential to boost ratings and create free advertising in the form of social media outrage, but it also has the potential to lose viewers.
I think there needs to be an important distinction between the nuanced depiction of sex and rape and the sensationalisation of these topics.  The representation of rape in popular culture can bring to light the inequity and perversity of victim blaming and slut shaming.  In this sense, it has the potential to be transformative.  If, however, the representation of rape perpetuates harmful stereotypes about consent, bodily autonomy, and sexuality, then it has the potential to be downright dangerous.

NC: At times, authors and writers might feel obliged to write in a more ‘politically correct’ way, including more dominant female characters, and bringing matters of social justice to the fore in their work, often requiring them to deviate from their original intentions. Do you think that this is modern society guiding and shaping modern literature, or fear of conflict stifling the creativity of modern authors and writers?

AS: I don’t necessarily agree with the foundations of this question because the simple inclusion of ‘a strong woman’ is both tokenistic and misses the point.  It’s not just serving political correctness to include a variety of people across the gender spectrum, from different social and ethnic backgrounds and nationalities, and of different sexual orientations.  Striving toward a more authentic representation of the world should make female characters – as well as non-white, LGBTIQA, and other minority characters – central to many more narratives than is currently the case.  Not every story needs to include all these elements, but greater narrative diversity would disrupt the repetition of stories about young white men, for young white men.
A simple way to even begin thinking about whether or not literature and popular culture is reflective of modern society is to implement The Bedchel Test.  This test, while useful, presents a ridiculously low base-line for the depiction of women in popular culture.  Developed by Alison Bedchel in 1985, The Bedchel Test seeks to “call attention to gender inequality in film” through three simple questions:(1) does the film have at least two named female characters; (2) who talk to each other; and (3) about something other than a man, or children?
A staggering number of films which have a strong or powerful female character do not pass this very simple test.  These include Mulan (1998), Avatar (2009), and The Avengers (2012).  Surprising films – such as How to Lose a Guy in 10 Days (2003) and Fifty Shades of Grey (2014) – do, in fact, pass. This is such a simple litmus test that it has obvious limitations: it does not account for how intrinsic the female characters are to the narrative, nor does it account for sexist content more broadly.  Still, passing The Bedchel Test can lead to commercial success by appealing to wider audiences.  Vastly successful films such as Thor (2012), Frozen (2013), and Cinderella (2015) pass with flying colours.  Frozen passes primarily on account of its depiction of sisterhood, even though other aspects of the narrative could be seen as problematic, while Cinderella has also received competing responses.
In a nutshell, a single interaction between female characters is not representative of women’s lives.  And creativity can be found in greater attention to women’s lives and social justice.  There are artistic and commercial benefits to innovative storytelling, so this should not be too onerous a task for novelists to prioritise.

NC: If a work was written in such a way that it reflected earlier works of literature, works that did not include any significant female characters, would you argue that this work is anti-feminist, or that it was merely an homage in the style of the work it reflected?

AS: Just as contemporary literature reflects its own era, earlier works of literature equally reflected the society in which it was produced.  Historically, the majority of women have not been seen as active contributors to the public sphere, their work in the private sphere has been either undervalued or idealised, and they have not been seen as self-determining individuals.
Of course, there’s a place for male-centric and female-centric literature, as there is film.  When such narratives characterise men and women as full and complicated human beings, novelists are striving toward the validation of women as well as men.  As previously mentioned, however, the majority of films cater for audiences of young white western men, and this bias is similarly true of the literary canon.  (For an amusingly demonstration of how this operates in other contexts, visit the excellent tumblr, ‘Congrats, you have an all male panel!’)  There is an opportunity for new novelists to upturn a literary canon that continues to privilege men’s writing, and to transcend the many limitations of this approach.
On a side note, I’m not particularly fond of the term ‘anti-feminist’ because it does not capture the multiplicity of negative and hostile responses to feminism.  The term ‘post-feminism’ has more contemporary utility, but it still implies that ‘feminism’ has a clearly defined meaning, when its meaning is always shifting, always being contested.[5]

NC: My final question. As you well know, in my writing (possibly due to me also being a student of history) I do extensive research on various elements of my works, whether I am simply plaguing friends with bizarre questions, or reading articles on medieval underwear and makeup. How important is it, when depicting genders, to craft their image and mannerisms using research? Or would you argue that an author should be as original as possible in their depiction, drawing mainly from his or her own mind?   

AS: Popular culture may always reflects the present more so than the past, but this isn’t a reason to abandon the quest for historical authenticity.  Many fiction readers, Hsu-Ming Teo writes, assume that the novels about history are largely factual – something which is often not true.[6]  It’s important for any writer of historical (or historically-inspired) fiction to aim for as much accuracy as possible.
Research can be most effective when novelists identify and understand their own personal biases.  To infuse the ‘facts’ with imagination, novelists should try and understand where research can help challenge their preconceptions about gender identity and gender representation.  If research can help the novelist come to new conclusions about gender, then through imaginative storytelling, so too can the reader be introduced to that which they had not previously considered.

Dr. Ana Stevenson is a Visiting Scholar in the Gender, Sexuality, and Women’s Studies Program at the University of Pittsburgh.  Her research interests include feminism, popular culture, and the relationship between history and literature.  She tweets from @singin_banana.
Thanks to Sheilagh Ilona O’Brien, a Ph.D. candidate in early modern history at The University of Queensland, for her editorial comments.  She tweets from @SheilaghIlona.



[1] Audrey Oldfield, Australian Women and the Vote (Melbourne: Cambridge University Press, 1994).
[2] Debra Ferreday, "Game of Thrones, Rape Culture and Feminist Fandom," Australian Feminist Studies 30, no. 83 (2015): 21-36.
[3] Amanda Claybaugh, The Novel of Purpose: Literature and Social Reform in the Anglo-American World (Ithaca: Cornell University Press, 2007).
[4] Lisa Maria Hogeland, Feminism and Its Fictions: The Consciousness-Raising Novel and the Women's Liberation Movement (Philadelphia: University of Pennsylvania Press, 1998).
[5] Angela McRobbie, "Post‐Feminism and Popular Culture," Feminist Media Studies 4, no. 3 (2004): 255-264.
[6] Hsu-Ming Teo, Desert Passions: Orientalism and Romance Novels (Austin: University of Texas Press, 2012).

Tuesday, 26 May 2015

The Lost Vignette

This week, I wanted to do something a little different. I thought it would be nice to indulge both myself, and my audience, by making an as yet unseen vignette available here on The Narrative Within. As some of you would be aware, my first published work, An Introduction to Doranath, was a collection of vignettes that served to introduce readers to my fantasy universe. Today, I humbly present Jonathan's Creation.

Jonathan's Creation


A thought came into being in the void, lingering like a lone candle in the darkness. Gradually new thoughts, beliefs, images, and ideas gathered unto the first thought, tightly orbiting it, joining it. Soon voices began to speak, adding yet more to the thought.
Unshakeable justice.
Honesty.
Purity.
Fury.
After a time, the ideals became descriptions.
The strongest arm.
The keenest sight.
The swiftest feet.
A soft, female voice made itself heard: A kind heart.
Slowly the vortex of swirling thoughts began to spiral in new ways, gradually forming into a recognisable shape. Lines of fiery red defined the arms and legs, yellow the torso, and cold blue the head.
Give him Dreams.
And Hopes.
Give him clarity of thought.
Bestow a sense of Purpose.
Again the soft voice spoke: Give him a name.

Jonathan awoke screaming, his mind suddenly alive. He looked down at large hands that moved at his whim. He ran them over his muscled chest, and down his legs. His mind teemed with sensation, every touch fascinating him. Jonathan raised his hands to his face, fingernails scratching over his stubble; fingers running through his long, brown hair.
He breathed in and felt his lungs fill with cold air. He looked about, but saw nothing but a grey haze.
A voice filled his mind: You must know what it is to be.
Agony lanced through Jonathan. The dim light of the haze was suddenly brilliant, scorching his eyes, and his skin felt as though it was being pierced by a thousand icy needles. Blood pounded in his suddenly aching head as his stomach churned, and an ear splitting shriek tore through sensitive eardrums.
The voice spoke again, its soft tones soothing him and overcoming his pain: You must know death.
Before Jonathan's eyes, his hands began to wither, and he felt his body deteriorating as it aged rapidly. As his body died, he felt his consciousness separating from it, his mind fading as he drifted away from his mortal shell. The voice brought him back to being, his body revitalised.
You must know compassion.
A deep and abiding warmth, tinted with an inexplicable ache, filled Jonathan, who smiled as unbidden tears rolled down his face. The emotion was complete, filling him with both care and dread all at once, overcoming all his senses.
Now, go into the world.

Jonathan felt a rushing sensation overtake him, and the haze vanished, only to be replaced by a  mountainous vista populated by grey boulders, green pines, and distant peaks shrouded in thin clouds.
"At last," said a weary voice.
Jonathan turned to see an old man in a grey cloak. He was seated on a stump, absently plaiting his long grey beard, and tapping his foot to some tune unknown. The strange man ran his grey eyes over Jonathan and said dryly, "Why must they always forget the clothes?"
Jonathan opened his mouth to reply but was cut off by the old man.
"Nevermind, here."
A brown rucksack was thrown to Jonathan, and he opened it. Inside was a homespun white tunic, brown trousers, and a pair of cracked leather boots. He fished all of the contents out and began to dress, his body completing the necessary movements automatically whilst his mind revelled in the fact that he had never done this before. As he pulled on his new trousers, he noticed for the first time the swirling, dark blue tattoos that covered his body.
The old man chuckled and said, "Pretty, aren't they? Marks you for what you are. Keep 'em covered round mortal folk, they draw plenty of attention. Yours are a bit different to the ones the others had. More of 'em, and different styles. Curious."
He walked up to the mystified, but dressed, Jonathan and pressed his forefinger to Jonathan's brow. Heat pulsed where he touched, and he frowned slightly.
The old man returned to his stump and sat, saying, "So you're it then. The final gambit."
"What?" asked Jonathan. His voice pleased him: it was deep and rich, filled with warm tones. He wondered how it sounded if he was to sing, or shout, or scream.
The old man waved the question away, "The understanding will come to you in due course, best I don't force it. Glad to see they have not compelled loyalty upon you though. Seems they listened to me for once."
Jonathan looked puzzled.
"Loyalty cuts both ways, boy. If it can be broken, it can be turned. Your older kin are proof of that. Now come, we have lots to do, and not half the time we need to do it!" 
Jonathan followed the old man down the mountainside, surprised that he was struggling to keep up with one so ancient. As he followed, more and more questions filled his mind. One, however, continually rose to the top.
Who was he?

Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Violence in the Narrative

Fiction, and particularly fantasy, is host to plenty of violence within its narrative. While working on my most recent project (coming soon), I wrote a scene that I found rather confronting. I regularly write violent scenes, so I am not a sensitive soul when it comes to that sort of thing, but this particular scene was actually a tad nauseating. This inspired me to think a little bit more deeply about how we, as writers, treat violence in our works. This is not going to be a 'this is right and that is wrong' discussion, but just a case of identifying some of the different forms that violence takes in writing, and why I think that certain types have the effects that they do. In short, today I will discuss various depictions of violence, and how they can impact upon the audience.

Combat


In my opinion the most common depiction of violence within fantasy novel is combat. Whether it involves fists, swords, guns, or improvised weapons, combat scenes are extremely prevalent. To be crystal clear, when I refer to 'combat' I am specifically talking about any scene involving two or more characters who are knowingly engaged in performing violent acts upon one another. In my experience, it is rare for the sorts of scene to be overly confronting or distressing in and of themselves. I have a number of thoughts on why this might be.
Fair: Combat has an air of fairness. Two armed combatants facing off against each other will almost inevitably lead to injury, and as such the reader anticipates the conclusion. Whether they are correct in their assumptions is irrelevant to a degree: They knew there would be bodily harm, and have (consciously or subconsciously) prepared themselves for that. 
Familiar: As I stated above, combat is frequent within fictional narratives, whether the narrative be written, acted on screen, or encountered in some form of interactive media. As such, the audience is likely to be both familiar with these types of scenes, and somewhat desensitized to them.
Entertaining: Well written/scripted/acted combat can be very entertaining. As such, the reader can be caught up with excitement, going along for the ride. Many combat scenes follow a predictable arc, and therefore bring the reader down with their conclusion. When engaged in this way, the reader flows with the narrative, and enjoys the highs and lows.
Not always graphic: While some narratives are famed for their gory and brutal combat scenes, I would argue that a larger number are almost sanitary in their nature. This 'clean' combat means there is little in way of horror for the reader, and so combat is not too confronting to read.
I will note here that combat can be loaded with graphic violence, but I will discuss that later.
As a whole, combat is fairly 'safe' for the reader, with low likelihood of shocks or disgust.

Beatings, Abuse, DV, Executions, and Self-harm


These sorts of scenes are confronting for a very, very obvious reason. These scenes are depicted in a variety of ways, for a variety of reasons. One author may make them very graphic in order to appal their audience, while another may leave many things tacit in a hope to allow the emotional degrees of the acts to sink in.
This form of violence is one that should always be treated with an immense level of sensitivity. For a broad swathe of reasons all the topics in this category can be extremely harmful emotionally to a reader, and as such should be treated carefully. I will not go into to much detail here, as I would hope that as educated individuals, my readers would be able to join the dots for themselves. I will, however, voice my opinions on these sorts of depictions. An author who uses these types of violence in their work purely as an emotional sledgehammer, with little attention to the sensitivity of the subject, should re-evaluate their approach to writing. There are far better ways to achieve emotional impact than flagrantly playing the rape card. I personally feel that when writing scenes that include this sort of violence, there should be a clear undertone that marks this form of violence out as horrific,  and would also encourage there to be an indication from the characters involved that they understand the level of horror that is going on. I would strongly discourage any writer who hides behind the excuse of 'it happens in real life' without offering solutions to these acts within their narrative, from doing so.
I am not saying that this sort of violence should be outright banned from narratives, I simply believe that it should be treated with a great deal of sensitivity.
It was, in fact, a scene of this nature that inspired this discussion. I was writing an execution scene (a hanging) witnessed by a child and her guardian. While it was not particularly graphic, both myself and my proofreader found the scene extremely confronting on an emotional level. Perhaps it was as confronting as it was due to the silences in the text. Never underestimate the power of suggestion. 

Graphic Violence


Some of you may cringe at that heading, and I apologise. Detailed violence has been something of a discussion point in recent years, particularly when it comes to visual mediums, and evenly more specifically when it come to video games. I have no problem with graphic violence, as an adult I can (usually) deal with it. There are some exceptions - teeth, I just cannot deal with someone's teeth being smashed out - but as a whole, the graphic depiction of violence doesn't faze me overly. 
I am sure that most of you think immediately of Game of Thrones when you read the term 'Graphic Violence', and that is fair enough. Off the top of my head I cannot think of anything more graphic in nature. Graphic violence is certainly not exclusive to that series, but Game of Thrones is (in)famous for its graphic depictions of all forms of violence.
Graphic violence requires itself to be depicted in great detail. Hearts flying one way, eyeballs the other, and viscera spilling onto the ground kind of thing. When used cleverly, graphic violence can be extremely powerful - even to the point of making the reader/viewer feel ill. When done less well, it can be detrimental to the narrative, annoying the reader, or even making a serious scene come off as 'cheesy'. Plenty of 'B' films are testaments to that. Books are protected from the dangers of low budgets, but can still suffer from this. I am sure a number of you can think of times you have read a graphic scene and skimmed over it because it was dull, or failed to hold the suspension of disbelief.

The Drama of Violence


While planning this little discussion, I started doodling with a little phrase, as is my wont. I have already covered in the above sections the drama of violence, but I will wrap up the discussion with this.

"Even in war, one should have a sense of dramr. That is why it is called the Theatre of War."

For another week, that is all. I have a rather exciting little piece in the works, and the first full draft of my next book is done, and is being edited.

Salve,
N N B Clarke

Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Good, Evil, and the multitudinous shades of Grey: The motivations of characters

One of the most important elements that can be used to define a character is their motivation. Without motivations, characters seem blank placeholders for the people they should be. Why do characters do what they do? What makes them tick? These are just some of the things we will discuss today.

Motivations


Of late, we have seen a number of films with sinister villains who have used 'evil' means to achieve an end that may not actually be that disagreeable to the audience. This approach allows the writer to demonize an end through the means used. I would suggest the message there is that the ends should never serve to justify the means, I won't delve into the debate on whether the loss of independent freedoms for greater peace/world order is acceptable here. All I will say is that I write here to give voice to my opinions in a forum of others passionate about literature. I imagine that should make my position on the matter quite plain.
Instead, we shall dive into the various motivations of characters within the narrative.

[I want to add here, and wish it to be remembered throughout this article, that not all motivations are constant. People change, and their motivations can be transitive]

The Good


Good guys (here 'guys' will serve as a gender neutral term) should be easy to write, right?
I would say yes, but only if you want a cardboard cutout, stereotype of a character. Real 'good' characters don't merely pop into existence when the narrative requires. They have lives, experiences, beliefs, and opinions; all of which have a bearing on their character. A number of questions that I always ask myself are...
Who are they?
Where are they from?
What do they do for a living? (When not gallivanting about, saving the world.)
Who relies upon them?
Why are they here?
What is their cultural background?
What do they believe in?
All of these questions have a bearing on who the character is, and thus also on their motivations.
There are many possible reasons for why a good guy does what they do. They could be driven by a deep-rooted sense of justice. Another may be seeking to rescue someone. Perhaps (despite being 'good') they seek revenge. 
You should also go into some depth about the motivations that the characters have. While the young, blonde hero with the chiselled jaw might have a strong sense of justice that governs his life, but will he really go across the continent in its pursuit, and if so, why? The wife of the local smith may want revenge for her husband's murder, but if the culprit is a prince from a neighbouring kingdom, will she pursue it to the point of risking starting a war? Once again, if so, why?
Also, five people might have similar motivations, but each will pursue them, live by them, and be guided by them to different degrees.

The Bad


The same guidelines apply to the narrative's villains. The Dark Lord didn't just show up one morning and declare war on the world for no reason.
Some baddies are driven by greed, or bloodlust, or a desire for revenge. Others could be driven by the same motivations as their 'good' counterparts.
To go into more depth, let us look at megalomaniacal baddies. Bad Guy X wants to rule the world. More than one narrative has left it at that, and used that motivation to justify the actions of the protagonist. That doesn't really cut the mustard for me as a reader, or writer. Two questions immediately spring to mind: Why do they want to rule the world? How do they intend to go about it?
Perhaps they want to overthrow mega-corporations, and replace the dysfunctional nations with a unified government for all mankind. Not all of us would be opposed to such a goal. How they go about achieving said goal might be what makes them a hero, or a lunatic. Think about some famous historical figures: Caesar, Charlemagne, Genghis Khan, or Churchill. No one is saying that they were nice guys, indeed they did some horrific things. What did they have in common? They were victos, and we all know who history is written in favour of...
I would also hypothesise that we view victors such as these in a certain light as we like to pretend that evil never wins.
A baddie should have motivations that are just as varied and convincing as those of the good guys. Don't forget, bad people are people too.

All the Grey Areas


I am most certainly not the first to say this, but few 'bad guys' do what they do thinking that they are evil, or are committing evil acts. Nearly all antagonists believe that they are doing the right thing. While it may be 'evil' from the point of view of the protagonist, it might still benefit many. World empires weren't founded on malice.
In this grey area I would also allocate those antagonists who are simply acting in accordance with their nature. Non-human characters in particular often fall into this category (especially computers and robots). Even if the actions of such a character are vile or objectionable, they are not evil or malicious per se.
The following is an excerpt from my upcoming novel Erelisia, and features a character who falls perfectly into this category.

Ashtasth looked absently at its fingernails as it replied, “Why not? I wish to feel the glory of victory once more. I desire the blood of a weaker race, and to watch my armies grind your people into dust. I desire power, and domination over all life.”
The prince spat, and snarled, “You are evil.”
Ashtasth paused, and wheeled upon his captive. Its bronze skin began to darken, growing small spines across its surface, its beautiful features becoming savage. Its teeth, previously perfect and white, yellowed and lengthened into fangs. Leathery wings sprang from its back, shredding its robes. The silver fingernails became talons and its mahogany eyes turned blood red. The beguiling voice became harsh and filled with rage as Ashtasth said, “No. I am no more evil than you are good. Good and evil are childish concepts, created by minds too feeble to face reality!
“All beings behave as their nature dictates. A snake bites, a lion hunts the sheep, men wage war, and the strong dominate the weak. I act in my best interests, seeking to achieve my ambitions, just as you do.” As it spoke, Ashtasth began to return to its bronze form, beauty taking hold once more.
The being moved back to its throne, saying, “The Elder Gods gave me life, those who your kind call the Dark Gods. They gave me the instinct to hunt, and to become stronger. I cannot deny my nature, no more than night can refuse to follow the day.”

Ashtasth has a higher level of awareness of its nature, but is nonetheless bound by it. 
Ultimately, these are simply my own guidelines which I adhere to as a writer. As a reader I always prefer to read characters who have convincing and relatable motivations. 

I hope, as always, that you have enjoyed this week's discussion

Until next time, 
N N B Clarke


Monday, 4 May 2015

A Week of Illness

I find myself struck down by some dastardly variant of the common cold this week, and as such am a little more scatter-brained than usual. As such, I thought it best to hold off on any heavy topics until next week (thus also giving myself more time to work on my studies, and on my upcoming books). So instead of my usual postulation on some matter of writing or another, I though I would grace your screens with three synopses. The first is for my already released work, the second is for the first book in a series of novellas, and the last is for my largest upcoming work, Erelisia.
I hope you all enjoy this.

An Introduction to Doranath

Serving as a reader's introductory guidebook to the fantasy world of Doranath, An Introduction to Doranath, is the first published work by N N B Clarke. In this brief volume, the reader will be introduced to eight significant historical figures of Doranath, from Estalethon the Ancient to Gorren Dasker and the Prisoner. The reader has the opportunity to experience a crucial moment in each figure's life, whether it be a decision that determines the salvation or ruination of their people, or the death of a father. Take a step into the unknown, and begin to uncover the secrets waiting in Doranath.

Karelmar: Hearthkin

Life is never easy, no matter what anyone says. Dana learnt this early. With no parents, no home, and only the clothes upon her back, Dana Hearthkin has almost know the world to be a harsh mistress. Even though luck seems to always be on the side of the orphan thief, she knows that it can all come tumbling down in a moment. When a heist with her only friend goes horribly wrong, the only person that the young thief knows she can turn to is an officer of the law. Will she be given a second chance, or do we all only get one?

Erelisia

Book One of the Elmuthian Saga, Erelisia is a tale of dark gods, treachery, and the indefatigable human spirit. For more that one thousand years, the Erelisian Empire has reigned over Sarentis. However, with the peace and complacency that comes with such longevity, corruption has begun to spread through the echelons of the Empire. Cestius, heir to the Imperial Throne, has been sent to the western borders of the Empire to investigate these matters of corruption within the administration. He soon finds himself embroiled in events that look to shake the foundations of the Empire itself. As a dark god rises, and he faces monstrous foes, Cestius finds himself doubting not only his faith in his gods, but also his faith in those closest to him. At the same time, the youngest legate in the history of the Imperial Legions must find a way to aid his prince, whilst coming to terms with his own destiny.
While corruption and political intrigue threaten the stability of the Capital, a dark god's army is approaching from the west. If Cestius and the legate are to succeed in saving their homeland, they must discover the truth behind the Empire's corruption, and persuade their elders to either accept the changes necessary, or replace them for the good of their people.

There we have it, folks. I apologise for the brevity of this weeks instalment, and I hope to be back in good health by next week. 
If you are interested in getting An Introduction to Doranath, you can get it here.
You can also follow this blog, or my Facebook, to keep up to date on my upcoming work.

All the best,
N N B Clarke